Tokyo Mew Mew No Hope Left 1

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(Okaaaaay, this is my first chapter, no flamin or trolling cause I'll report u if u do.  So be nice plzzzz...  ^___^  Minto is such a biotch.)

Hello.  My name is Aizawa Sakura.  I live in a big house in Tokyo  and I have long hair and green eyes, and I wear fishnet pantyhose and I have an older twin sister named Minto.  This is my story.
I was at school, I go to a public junior high.  Minto goes to a really fancy one, but that's because my parents always thought she was better.  She was the one who got to go to ballet classes, but they didn't send me even though I was really good because they needed someone at home to was the dishes.
I remember crying myself to sleep every night, because my sister was just so mean to me!  She did ever thing she could to make life hard for me, from spilling her drinks on my lap to stealing my first boyfriend.  
This morning, I looked in the mirror.  I  saw a small, thin girl with large magenta eyes, pale skin, a medium-sized chest, and mid-leg length black hair with ao and pinku streaks.  I was born with them, but everyone thought I was a freak, and hated me.  I was so ugly, I could feel myself beginning to cry, but I held it back.  I'd always held it back.
I pulled on my uniform, which was too small.  It was a gray sailor fuku with a red bow, but the skirt was way too short, and the blouse was way too tight.  I waved goodbye to my parents, who paid no attention to me.  They were too busy helping Minto put on her makeup and comb her hair and put on her dark blue uniform.  She smirked at me.  I looked away and walked out the door, squeezing my eyes shut so I wouldn't cry.
As I walked to school, I saw my best friend, Momomiya Ichigo.  I waved to her and began to run toward her, but I slipped on a puddle, and got covered in mud.  Ichigo  laughed meanly.  
"Sakura, you can't think that I want to walk to school with you," she said, tossing her dark-pinku pigtails.  "I have new friends."  Just then, I noticed two stupid-looking giggling blond girls.
"Like, hi, Ichigo-chan!" said one of them, putting on lots of slutty pink liptick.
"Hi, Lindsay!" said Ichigo.  "Look at that little dork in the mud!  She thought I wanted to walk to school with her." (see, that's lindsey, lol.  when she reads this, she'll b p-oed)
They laughed, and began to walk off to school.
I burst into tears.  I'd tried to hold it in, but I couldn't.  I wiped the tears off my pail face,  and stood up, knowing that I'd get in trouble for being muddy.
When I got to school,the teacher told me that I had to stay for detention.  I nodded, not saying anything.  The teacher gave me an extra hour of detention for not being respectful.
He handed out the grades, I saw that I'd gotten an A.  Then, he saw who I was.  He crossed out the A and replaced it with an F.  I turned my head away to hide the tears.
During recess, I saw Ichigo talking to Aoyama Masaya, a tan jock form the kendo team.  I think she was asking him out.  It made sense, the jocks and the preps just went together.  I, however, never saw anything in him.  He was really stupid, and he picked on goths and emos.  But, once I loved him.  I was young, and I confessed my love to him.  But, he turned me down  and went out with a stupid blond girl instead.  I'd cried so hard, but it also helped me realize something.  He wasn't worth it.  He was cruel and superfishal, and that wasn't what I wanted.  
I sighed, and sat down, in a corner without any people.  I had only one friend, her name was Haruko. (c here u are sis!)  She had soft white hair which went down to her ankles.  She didn't dress in a uniform, because she was half-demon so she wore a loose kimono which fell almost off of her shoulders.  She smiled.
"What's wrong, Sakura-chan?"
"I've had a terrible day.  Why does everyone like Minto better than me?" I sobbed.
"Because she's a prep, and she's popular.  But, you're better, deep down.  You're smarter than her any day."
I looked at Haruko.  "How can I be so sure?"